OH SHIT!

I wrote this poem with my friend, he wrote the first three lines, and I wrote the next three lines, we took over every three lines in turn.

I have learned many things out of my mistakes
Try to understand life as much as it takes
But, I can't give up and just hit the brakes.

I believed that I knew right from wrong,
that I had enough lessons on this life alone
Though, I ain't even got a clue 'bout where my life belong.

I even got to a point where I thought I was going to die.
But, I stuck it out strong and give it another try.
I can't live in this world full of lies.

Be a hypocrites, so you show off your honesty
Tears drops off your cheeks to spread animosity
But who said we are united in this community?
I always try to grab every single opportunity
Stay with my family as if we are one whole unity

Once united, now our loves doesn't belong together
it's not like in the movies we go see in the theater.
Someone please, please guide me to the way I belong.

Sometimes I just sit here and I ask myself "what am I doing all wrong?"
I'm not the type of person who follows along,
I can't stand it when people tell me to go along with this road

Comments

[Lauryn]

Hmmm, actually some people told me the same thing as you said. So I did the calibration, adjusted colours and everything, but still people say the same thing. I don't know why... This shot looks quite dark on my screen as well though, yea.. Thanks for lettin me know anyways!

[Rabin]

Hi Lauryn

Aren't some of your night shots a bit too dark. Like in this picture of Oasis21, we can hardly know what that object in the middle of the pic. Was wondering if it is a good idea to shoot in different mode.

Rabin

[Lauryn]

Sure... But I live in Nagoya, and rarely have chance to go to Tokyo.. I used to go to Tokyo quite often on business trip, but nowadays we have a camera and a microphone in our meeting room... Yeah, TE meeting in Tokyo sounds great to me too. Oh well, let's hope for it oneday.

[Rabin]

Hi..

Wish you a very happy new year. Nope I am not a Muslim. Hey hope to meet you around someday in Tokyo..Has there been any gathering of TE members in Tokyo.. I would love to join, if you know do let me know..

Rabin

[Lauryn]

Hi Rabin, long time.
Actually this isn't a good poem.. we just tried to play with rythme and that's it for it, just like a rap lyrics. Oh well, I will try it better next time.
Thanks for your comments.

Have a wonderful christmas!(or are you Muslim? haha)

Lauryn

[Rabin]

Hi there

That is a nice poem..

Rabin